17 March 2006 | Vol. 6, No. 1
Turtle, Turtle, Loon
What counted was concoction,
the able conduction of parts.
Clothes hang to match
my sand chart, the why I can
manipulate the lines.
I am five feet eight inches.
Wrong. I am five feet
six and one half inches.
Who cares what I hang from it.
All I think is watch the I
and the I takes over. I'm so sick
of branches equal limbs
equal my legs and arms,
I see a turtle, turtle—wrong. It's a loon.
Why did I guess him so hard
last Friday night?
I write V for versus.
Everything against something.
Mine encloses,
excludes that which excludes.
I give you the gift
of enclosing alteration
in my versus exclusion.
You don't know,
even though I tell you
in private conversation:
This is the gift—
I changed when
I crumpled that versus
which was not a versus after all:
shift the lexicon to the right of us.
You and I are busy locating
a fumarole for V.
Excise the move I made to you.
Turn V to vapor.
About the author:
Lily Brown's work has appeared in the Harvard Advocate and in Shampoo Poetry. She is a first-year student in the MFA program at Saint Mary's College. Though she has spent 23 years of her life in Massachusetts, she is intolerant of temperatures below 45 degrees Fahrenheit.
For further reading:
See the complete list of work by Lily Brown at 42opus. Browse the contents of 42opus Vol. 6, No. 1, where "Turtle, Turtle, Loon" ran on March 17, 2006. List other work with these same labels: poetry.



